如何从考官范文中提取雅思写作的素材?

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华盟教育 发表于 2017-3-3 14:31:43 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

                                                       华盟教育yoyo
而且,对于大多数写作徘徊在5-6分考生来说,需要提高的并不是所谓的新颖丰富的论据和观点(因为评分准则中并没有对论据和观点的新颖性有任何的要求),而是如何在准确审题之后把合适的论据通过为观点服务、并且使英语为母语的考官能够理解的方式恰当的表达成文字。下面会通过剑桥真题7Test3的考官范文中的部分细节为大家呈现,如何通过考官范文提炼观点论据:
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
首先,题目中就有一些很有用的信息可以供大家来积累观点和论据了:
1. job satisfaction/well-being---只要是涉及到工作类别的话题,题目中的内容只要是有利于提高员工工作满意度的或者是增强幸福感的,那么大家就可以选择同意的角度和观点来写,呈现出来的句式可以是“...(题目中的内容) play an important role in enhance job satisfaction/the sense of well-being among employees”.而且对于“well-being”而言,是可以用于更广泛的题目的,如果对于政府类话题,那么题目中政府的做法提高的就是 the citizens'/public well-being.
2. realistic---这个词给大家一个很万能的思路,当大家发现题目中的内容所涉及的某一种措施是很难得以实施的时候,观点就可以表达为...is unrealistic或者It is unrealistic for....to do......,eg. It is unrealistic for the government to pay tuition fees for every university student.
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Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one's job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.

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